3月3日 百分大作文示范写作 | 个人信息存于网络的利弊

Ø hacker n. 黑客，强逼应用于[篡改]（他人的）人工智能详细资料的人

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As a matter of fact, storing personal information online is an inevitable trend, which indicates that behind such practice are more gains. The most evident one is that this development brings much convenience and improves working efficiency. In the past, there were either cases where consumers walked around in shopping malls the whole day to look for something eye-catching and compare prices or cases where clients spent a half of a day queuing in a bank to handle business activities. However, with the increasing busy lifestyle that the majority of people are forced to live nowadays, they do not have much time, and those everyday activities can actually be done by a single click on certain websites once netizens have put their information online. In this case, such a tendency suits today’s fast-paced life.

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Conclusion

In a nutshell, the cons of putting private information online pale into insignificance when set against the pros.

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